Black ops is one of my favorite video games , I play this game usually play this game every day in the winter because when its cold and our family stays inside I can play that game . The best part about this game is the nazi zombies.
Nazi zombies is a different part of the game . You start off at round one and you keep moving up rounds and the numbers of the zombies keep growing.
lundi 11 avril 2011
Video game review
Publié par alex à 19:14
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Alex,
What you did well:
1) You chose a game that you are familiar with.
2) You name some positive features about it.
What you need to consider for your next draft:
1) Does this sound like a professional review? What kinds of things would you read about if you were reading a review about a video game.
What I would like you to do before you write your next draft:
2) Take a blank sheet of paper and make a list of all the features you like about the game and another list of all the things you like about the plot of the game.
Once that is done, we'll have a look at what we can to with that information to improve your review.
Let me know when you are ready to see me.
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