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vendredi 25 mars 2011

haikus

crowd cheering loud
Lights flickering
music blasted

home crowd silenced
 home players devistaded
away crowd cheering .

on the ice
waiting for the crack
falling through

1 commentaires:

DD-QA a dit…

Alex,

I'm not sure if these poems go together or not, but they create sensory images that are easy to imagine. We'll have a look at them together for the next draft but there is very little tweaking to do with them.

Nice work, Alex. Keep it up.