crowd cheering loud
Lights flickering
music blasted
home crowd silenced
home players devistaded
away crowd cheering .
on the ice
waiting for the crack
falling through
vendredi 25 mars 2011
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Alex,
I'm not sure if these poems go together or not, but they create sensory images that are easy to imagine. We'll have a look at them together for the next draft but there is very little tweaking to do with them.
Nice work, Alex. Keep it up.
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