As the team surrounds eachother
He was sitting on the bench .
He was not a part of this team ,
He was nothing.
He had nothing to do with this team.
As the team surrounds him
He was right in the middle of it .
He was the best part about this team.
He was everything.
He was the most important part of the team.
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Alex,
This is a great start for your parallell stanzas poem. Isn't it interesting what a fine line can divide a person being accepted and valued to one being left out.
For the next draft: See what you can add for details to bring each of these situations to life. It would probably be easier to work in a Word or a Googledoc for this. Let me know if you need a hand with this and I'll help you set that up.
You have a talent in this area, Alex. When you write about something that matters, it shows. Keep at it.
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