Video game review
NHL 11, This game is owned by kids and tennagers and some time adults , this game is the most thriling
intense , the most like the real life game of hockey.The players are all the name of thi years hockey season in the nhl. You can be a GM mode and gm is general manager. The general manager decides who to scout and who they want to trade.
lundi 9 mai 2011
Publié par alex à 11:15
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eske this i dont know ske
oh dat cool
Alex,
What you did well with this review:
- You give me an idea who would appreciate this kind of video game.
- You give me some of the features of this game (GM mode etc...)
Things you might want to try to improve the review:
- The sentence structure needs work in this review. Read it out loud and slowly to see what it would sound like to your reader. This would help you to know where you can make a few changes to clear it up.
- I would like a bit more information about the game. What do you do in this game. Think of it as a review you can write for clueless parents who want to buy a gift for their kids. They know nothing about it but when they hear what's in it, they will know if their kid will like it or not.
Let me know if you need a hand with this one.
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