My issue is bad bad refs . Its very madening when you have to get all mentally prepared for the game and phisicly prepared.You are playing against a rival team that everyone is all pumped up about , even the fans. The minute you take your first shift and there is already a ridicoulus penalty. You are going to have to not play the same game that your team is succsesful with.
jeudi 19 mai 2011
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Alex,
This is an issue that many people will be able to relate to. I can totally understand what you are saying and I've never been a hockey player. But as a fan, I understand the frustration you are talking about.
In order to better develop your issue piece, try taking a bit longer to develop it. Slow it down and give more detail about the effect the ref can have on the outcome of a game.
Another thing that might work here is to start off with a scenario that you have experienced, to give the reader an idea of what it's like. Put them in the situation with you and then explain afterwards how a bad ref can undo all the prep you have done to get ready for a game.
Let me know if you need a hand with this one.
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